2010年10月24日星期日

眼底星空


鬼异的心跳,
像被打碟的呼吸…
正与墙壁碰撞的眼球,
隐约看见,
你的眼底有了另一片星空…
只有泪水看见我的表情…

5 条评论:

  1. 我不喜欢写甜的东西,或许这就是我.粉饰太平的笑容,隐藏保护着另一个人格...这个帖子纯粹只是抒情罢了,抒发回忆沙漠中曾出现的那一片星空..目送一颗小流星离开的洒脱..

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  2. 你还是充满了神秘感...我好想多了解你一些...麻烦你不要那么神秘啦,好吗?还有我并不觉得《眼底星空》是一篇甜的文章。我觉得,这是一篇关于,对于一个人的离去感到很无奈,很惋惜“他”未能知道你的感受是什么的一篇文章。我不知道为什么你不要让“他”看见你的表情,但是有时候,你不说,“他”怎么会知道你在想些什么,你的感受又是什么呢?

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  3. first of all, I said我不喜欢写甜的东西... Read cafefully...
    secondly, I just write this to 抒发, it does not mean that I'm doing something to attract her concentration.. if as, it's annoying really..
    thirdly, i let her go, as i knew i can't give her what she wants..

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  4. Because of what you said so, I remind you what you wrote isn't sweet. And, second, I know you just wrote that to express yourself and you already told me about her today, so need not to repeat it here. Third, if you really know you can't give her assurance that she needed and you already choose to let go, then just leave it, stop getting reminded by that.

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  5. this is my freedom, my life.. I have right to decide!

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